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PostSubject: Nope   Mon Feb 15, 2010 9:11 am

Hi


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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Mon Feb 15, 2010 9:14 am

nah man


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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Mon Feb 15, 2010 10:31 am

This is the one where you turned into a wolf and hung out with other wolves after finding some ring, right?
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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Mon Feb 15, 2010 10:32 am

Cool story, bro.

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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:21 am

@Chan: Yup. I've improved it though.

@Mari: thanks.


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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:24 am

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@Mari: thanks.

I'm laughing because he doesn't get the joke.
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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:44 am

...?
bro


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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:48 am

bro, it's a cool story


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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:34 pm

....
Summary?
Kthnx.

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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:37 pm

Yeah. Please, I won't read past the first sentence at this point.
And you could also put it in a spoiler box so it doesn't take up the whole page.

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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Mon Feb 15, 2010 5:00 pm

Wasn't I supposed to help you with this, and then you like, disappeared for a few months?

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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Mon Feb 15, 2010 5:09 pm

Marmalade wrote:
Spaghetti wrote:
@Mari: thanks.

I'm laughing because he doesn't get the joke.
Spaghetti wrote:
...?
Lern2internet
http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/cool-story-bro

Also, tl;dr
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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Mon Feb 15, 2010 5:48 pm

Crater wrote:
Marmalade wrote:
Spaghetti wrote:
@Mari: thanks.

I'm laughing because he doesn't get the joke.
Spaghetti wrote:
...?
Lern2internet
http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/cool-story-bro

Also, tl;dr


I felt this applied.

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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:25 pm

sorry, Never heard of it till now. Also, I'll get s a summary up soon.
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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Mon Mar 01, 2010 8:28 pm

K, I've finally got a summary typed up.  I want to have a long book, so the summary is a bit, long, although I probably could've shortened it up....oh well.  Too lazy.  Well, here it is:

bro goes bro...

comments?


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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Mon Mar 01, 2010 8:59 pm

Still too long.

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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:55 pm

Ben puts on a ring, turns into a wolf, shit happens, he saves the world, the end.

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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Tue Mar 02, 2010 8:20 pm

ShadowKirby wrote:
Still too long.
yeah, sorry. I'll try to shorten it up.
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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Wed Mar 03, 2010 7:35 am

tl;dr
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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Wed Mar 03, 2010 4:25 pm

The title sounds like a doujin.
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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Wed Mar 03, 2010 4:34 pm

indianchan wrote:
The title sounds like a doujin.
...
Lol'd.

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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Wed Mar 03, 2010 5:24 pm

ShadowKirby wrote:
indianchan wrote:
The title sounds like a doujin.
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Lol'd.
A doujin with a blatant typo, to be specific.
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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Wed Mar 03, 2010 7:00 pm

indianchan wrote:
ShadowKirby wrote:
indianchan wrote:
The title sounds like a doujin.
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Lol'd.
A doujin with a blatant typo, to be specific.
Oh my god.
He misspelled Welders.

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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Wed Mar 03, 2010 8:01 pm

Yes, the title isn't very good, especially the subtitle. If you have any suggestions to help improve, please mention them.
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PostSubject: Re: Nope   Wed Mar 03, 2010 8:36 pm

Uh. You never really want to use "my" or "I' really in a work title like this.
So that's issue one. Second, is a subtitle really neccessary?
Plus the title itself is much too complex.
Trigem by itself should suffice. And then a subtitle if you want, but something less ... odd.
So like
"TRIGEM: [One-to-three-word subtitle]"

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